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Crap tittle.

I wanted to submit this when i finished this. (That was Wednesday because i worked on this after school) But my family came and i had to see them. My Uncle from Mauritius came to England again. (Yay! :la:) Then when they left it was midnight so i had to go to sleep for school the next day.

Then Thursday, I got tired from school, but i wanted to submit this but some thing was stopping me. The same with yesterday!

Today i am submitting this if it's the last thing i do. I came back from school on Wednesday and this beautiful master piece took me 3 freaking hours! Well i did save time because i did use this awesome base that i was searching for them 2. It's by the amazing ~personalsecret. I wanted a base for when they first met. I am very glad ~personalsecret made this base. I am never doing lineless things again. That was to damn hard. By i was too lazy drawings lines.

Later i am gonna write like a story here for when they first met.

Anyways! Hope you like it ~personalsecret and everyone else.

Ree, Nabz & Art: :iconprincezzree:
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Blank Base: [link] (If you want to do this base then click on this link)

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Notice i shooting star? :star: what do you think that means now between them?


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EDIT: *08/09/2012* It's later so i am gonna wirte the the story now! yay!

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One late, dark night, Ree got angry with Black Mystery she decided to fight him on her own. Mean while the FreeFighters are searching for her because she left them with so much anger and rage. Ree and Black Mystery were fighting in the woods and near a house far away from any other house. There was this teenage boy in the house in his bed, reading before he goes to bed while there was fighting scenes happening just at his front door.

????: "And then the zombie goes towards him and-"

Suddenly, just when he was reading there was this big boom sound outside.

Ree: Grrr...
Black Mystery: Your just new to all this little princess! You got alot to learn about me. So for now, you shouldn't fight me alone!
Ree: C-c-come.....B-back.......! goes down

The teenage boy heard that noise and he decided to wait a bit incase it comes back. After awhile, he decided to get out of the house and look what was happening.

????: Whoa! Hey you! Are you ok?! Can you hear me? Hmmm... She went down. she needs my help! She just needs some rest...

The boy lifted up Ree and he took her is his house. He put her lying on his bed. Then he runs to get some pillows and he went to sleep on the floor.

????: I hope this girl is ok...She looks really hurt. i cant tell if she broken her arms or legs. Hope she doesn't. Well when she wakes up she just need some fresh drink of water to feel better. Getting sleepy now....If i wasn't awake i would have never saved her...Hmmm...Is she waking up already?!
Ree: groans
????: Hello?
Ree: W-where...I am...I....?
????: Your're in my house.
Ree: Huh? Why iam i in your house? I was outside...Fighting!
????: Fighting?! Why? You could have really hurt yourself.
Ree: Nah. I dont think like that. Anyways. I was saving my family.
????: But are you ok? I mean you could have breaken bones?!
Ree: Nah! I am fine. I just got tired. He was beating me up quite badly. By the way. what's your name?
????: I am Nabz. But you look alot familiar
Ree: What do you mean?
Nabz: I think i read you some where. Let me think. I think it was the Legendary Scripts.
Ree: Wow! So do you know who i am, huh?
Nabz: stares at Ree for a very long time and thinking who she is I know who you are! Your the Legendary Princess?! It's a pleasure to make you, Princess!
Ree: Dont call me that! I dont like being called that with my friends!
Nabz: Friends?
Ree: Yeah! i mean you saved my life!
Nabz: So what should i call you by?
Ree: My name. Ree. Ree The Hedgehog.
Nabz: Nice name Prince- I mean Ree.
Ree: Thanks! so that means you know i am human, right?
Nabz: Course! To tell you the truth, I am human too!
Ree: What?! Really?
Nabz: Yeah! I came here when i was 3. I think some thing bad happened to them and then i just remember being here all alone.
Ree: That must be hard living on your own.
Nabz: Your right!
Ree: So do you know where you come from in Earth?
Nabz: I come from Mauritius.
Ree: No way! I am a Mauritian too!
Nabz: Whoa! That's good to know we have things in common.
Ree: Yeah!

They were talking for a long while but came back to the same topic to where they started with...

Ree: I shouldn't be here! I should go!
Nabz: You cant! you need more rest!
Ree: But-
Nabz: I am a first aider! So i can tell your still tired.
Ree: Cool! But are you sure you'll be fine on the floor? I mean i feel bad that i am on you bed.
Nabz: Dont be. I am fine. I'm comfortable sleeping any where. Be the way your're the first personi meet who is so nice to me.
Ree: Wow! Thanks! Your a pretty nice guy yourself...Well we should get some rest now.
Nabz: Yeah i am s-strating to...get Yanws sleep...y...Zzzzz
Ree: sleeping and thinking Poor guy. All alone. It's not fair...He's so nice. I should take him with me. Then he wont be alone. He'll be talking more often and being more happy. Becoming more confident and a prouder person. He would feel important. He reminds me of myself when i was on Earth...When i was alone and people bullying me and no one could help me. # No one should have that experience like i did. It's not fair! Dont worry Nabz, you'll never be alone ever again.

Later in the morning...

Ree: Yawns
Nabz: Morning!
Ree: Morning! Whoa! This that for me?!
Nabz: Yeah. I thought you would like it.
Ree: That's very kind of you. My brother did the same too me. But you remind me of me.
Nabz: Really? How?
Ree: When i lived on Earth, i was always alone. People bullied me and no helped me. Well that was when my brother went travelling. #
Nabz: Oh. Your brother must have been a great person that you always talk about him.
Ree: Yeah. And because of that it's hard to move on with out him.
Nabz: Here, take this.
Ree: Why?
Nabz: When i saw you, you looked uncovered.
Ree: looks at herself and notices her clothes are more revealing and blushes Oh my! Thanks for letting me know.
Nabz: Your welcome...blushes and gives her the coat.
Ree:takes the coat I was wondering if you would like to come with me...
Nabz: W-what?
Ree: I know how it is to be alone and no should go though that. If you come with me you can see more people, talk more and become a better person. I know now meeting friends can make a big difference and i know that now.
Nabz: Fine. I will come but then i'll think about staying there or not.
Ree: Ok.

Suddendly, there was a knocking sound on the door. Nabz and Ree turned around with shock to wonder who it is.

Nabz: Stay here. I'll open it.
Ree: Ok.

Nabz went walking to the door and opened and found 2 people standing in front of his door.

Nabz: Hello. Can i help you?
???: Yes.
???: were looking for our daughter.
Nabz: could these be Ree's parents? What does she look like?
???: She's a pink hedgehog.
Ree: runs to the front door Mum, Dad!
Nabz: Oh these are your parents!
Mum: Darling! are you ok? you look hurt.
Nabz: She's fine. She just needs some rest.
Dad: Who are you and why are you with our daughter?
Ree: Dad?! He looked after me. he was the only one around to help me. He knew what he's doing.
Mum: how do you know that?
Nabz: Because i am a first aider.
Mum: Oh. Me too.
Nabz: then you should have known that.
Mum: thanks for rubbing it in.
Ree: Mum?! Dont be so rude! He's been though alot and i dont want him hurt any more!
Nabz: I am not hurt.
Ree: You may say that but on the inside your hurt and you need help.
Dad: So come on then lets move it Sweetie!
Mum: Thanks for looking after my Darling.
Nabz: You do know that i am coming right?
Dad: Why?
Ree: Because i want him to come!
Dad: Sigh Fine.
Nabz: Thanks Ree!
Ree: It's alright. The reason my parents are like this is because they dont like me near boys too much.
Nabz: Whoa! I am the lucky guy then!
Ree: Yeah! But dont worry. i know how to talk to them.


After awhile, Ree, Nabz and her parents came to FreeFighters HQ...

Ree: home sweet home!
Crystal: Ree!
Ree: Sorry about the blast off.
Boomer: That's understandable.
Light: Right! You was just saving your famille!
Rabi: Who's that guy?
Nabz: Gonna introduce me to them?
Ree: Oh yeah! This is Nabz! He saved me and looked after me last night and this morning. Now Nabz I am part of the FreeFighters. The leader of us is Faira, she has the powers of fortune and she's a pretty good leader.
Faira: Oh Thank you.
Ree: Next up is Ramone. He's the fastest out of us lot and he has the power of water.
Ramone: To keep you cool on a hot day.
Ree: Then it's are youngest FreeFighter Liam. He is the best high flyer and he has the power of air.
Liam: Well i am the youngest in the Freefighters but not with our friends.
Ree: next is our fire girl power Joanna. She is half spelled and is able to fly and she has the power of fire.
Joanna: Well it's nice to see new faces.
Ree: Light is next. He is are little bat and knows swordsmanship and he speaks french just like us. He has the power of light.
Light: Bonjour! C'est un plaisir de rencontrer quelqu'un comme moi. <it's a pleasure to meet someone like me.>
Nabz: I know swordsmanship too!
Light: Vraiment? Maintenant c'est intéressant. <Really?! Now thats interesting.>
Ree: Anyways. Lastly Are strongest and powerful fighters is Boomer. Uses a lot of technology and He's very intelligent. He has the power of Earth. As in ground and plants and stuff like that, not Earth planet.
Boomer: It's great to meet you!
Ree: then we met some friends who's part of the FreeFighters. first we met Rabi and Tony. They are both echidnas and they guard the head emerald.
Rabi: it's a pleasure to meet you.
Tony: It's nice to know another guy in the group.
Ree: Lastly we have Crystal. My best friend. she has the powers of ice so she doesn't like hot things.
Crystal: Thank you for saving my friend!
Nabz: Your welcome!

After awhile Nabz got to know them all more and he was quite happy...

Ree: So do you want to stay here with me. I mean i owe you this much after what you done for me.
Nabz: I decided. I decided to stay home.
Ree:sigh That's a shame. I was hoping you would like to stay with every one here.
Nabz: I know but i like where i live.
Ree: Ok. But if you do change your mind or want to see me again i am always here and your welcome to stay here any time.
Light: Oui! Vous pouvez revenir quand vous voulez aussi. Il ya toujours un espace pour de nouveaux amis. Ce serait super de te revoir. <Yes! You can come back when ever you want too. There is always a space for new friends. It would be great seeing you again.>
Nabz: Merci beaucoup. <Thank you very much.>
Ree: Je veux dire en français. Je vous remercie de m'avoir aidé et j'espère qu'un jour nous l'occasion de rencontrer à nouveau. Au revoir mon ami. J'espère que vous rester en sécurité et bien prendre soin de youslef. Je n'oublierai jamais que vous et ce que vous avez fait. Vous êtes une très bonne personne et de ne jamais l'oublier. Tu vas me manquer. <I want to say this in french. Thank you for helping me and hopefully one day we'll get to meet again. Good bye my friend. I hope you stay safe and take good care of youslef. I will never forget you and what you have done. You are a very good person and never forget that. I will miss you.>
Nabz: Nous vous remercions de vous dire et je ne vous oublierai jamais trop. Après tout votre celui qui a mis un sourire sur mon visage. J'espère que vous êtes aussi sûr et espérons que vous aurez un voyage fort à la vie. Ree princesse Je me souviendrai toujours vous cela parce que votre une personne très spéciale. <Thank you for you words and i shall never forget you too. After all your the one who put a smile on my face. I hope you are also safe and hope you have a strong journey to life. Princess Ree i will always remember you becuase your a very special person.>
Ree: So long my friend!
Nabz: Hope we meet some day!


After a few days, both Nabz and Ree couldn't stop thinking about each other. Ree couldn't stop thinking about him because of who he is and who he reminds him of. Nabz couldn't stop thinking about her because he met the legendary princess and now he cant stop thinking about how much she made him smile. One day, out of no where Nabz returned to the FreeFighter's home...

Light: Ree! Ree! Votre Nabz ami est de retour! Il s'agit de très bonnes nouvelles! <Ree! Ree! Your friend Nabz has come back! This is very good news!>
Liam: What did he say?
Ree: Where is he!
Nabz: Bonjour! I have come back!
Joanna: I think i understand now!
Ramone: Me too!
Faira: What are you doing back here.
Nabz: I could bear it. Seeing you all made me so happy. I couldn't stop thinking about you guys and especially Ree. She's the one you made me smile.
Ree: That's funny! I couldn't stop thinking about you too. You remind me of so many things i just wanted to help you real badly.
Light: Eh bien maintenant vous pouvez l'aider à devenir meilleur! <Well now you can help him become better!>
Nabz: Yeah! I really wanted help to!
Boomer: Well welcome to the group!
Crystal: Me and Ree can show you around.
Dad: Then you can stay with Ree.
Nabz & Ree: W-what?!
Mum: You also make Ree very happy.
Dad: Yes. She says you remind her of Zee.
Nabz: Zee?
Ree: My brother.
Mum: Yes! We both though about this so please do it.
Ree: Well.
Dad: You had no problems sleeping that night together so why not now?
Ree: Dad! It wasn't like that!
Mum: Fine we'll get another bed for him then you can sleep in the same room. Ok?
Ree: Sure. Blushes but not that much
Nabz: Fine that. <u. Blushes more than Ree almost turning red</u>

So Nabz decided to stay with the FreeFighters and discover new things with Ree and the others.

The End! :meow:

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# x2 Ree Turns Into A Hedgehog Story


All characters in this story belongs to moi and only me.


Mauritians speak Mauritian Creole and in other words broken french. I translated it in French because Google translator doesn't have broken french.

I :heart: Mauritius! :love:

Thank you for reading my story and hope now you have a nice day! :)
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